Disheartened, disillusioned, dis-anchored
Until you gathered me up in your arms
And started a slow dance, my very first
And yours too, I guess, waltzing together
Moving slowly, at peace, soaking in the warmth
Requiring no music
The rhythm set listening to your heartbeat
Engulfed in love abound
And then came the realization:
My roots are with you...
Vote for me now!
I guess ill have to improve my vocabulary to comment on such beautiful poems of urs...as I always fall short of words :)
ReplyDeletedat wouldn't be required, else I wont understand the comments :P angrezi zara kamzor hai meri
ReplyDeleteAs always archika...TAKE A BOW! :) a very beautiful piece and seriously even my vocab falls short of the awe that your writings generate
ReplyDeleteAll thanks to MS WORD thesaurus :P
ReplyDeletenice poem :)
I still couldn't get it(the last part of it; read it thrice). :|
ReplyDeleteI'm sure when I will it'll be beautiful!
Maybe kyunki mujhe saccha pyaar nahi hua kisi se :P
thesaurus \o/ \m/ XD
ReplyDeletenice XD and talking of vocabulary i don't have one to begin with:P
ReplyDeletetouching :)
ReplyDeleteLovely! :)
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