Neither flesh nor bones
I am just made up of hopes
In you, I still live.
Neither lymph nor blood
I am but just of love a flood
In you, I still live.
It was the end of my body
My life is not yet done
because in you, I still live.
In this age, few compose better! hats off Archika! the feelings that you are able to convey through your words are truly amazing!
ReplyDeletethanks :) wrote this a long time back :)
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I have always loved this one :)
ReplyDeleteA put of deep thoughts in brevity. Commendable piece :)
ReplyDeleteA piece I wrote when I was 14.
DeleteI degrade with time :P
haha :) ...perhaps with time we tend to be more articulated and less genuine. but not true in your case- your recent ones are also equally good.
DeleteI am humbled :)
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